Murad136 2008-11-11 15:37:38

walking into temple, spider stalks into the temple, girl trips down stairs , something scary happens , spider bites, 25 second fight with spider, at the end she dies with a motto :

Sialys 2008-11-11 15:39:31

An old temple in the jungle, that instantly reminds me of the Inca from the Andes. So say this is a girl who is on her own, exploring an old temple in an Inca village, she stumbles over something and falls into a pit and is led to a small cavern with many skeletons and such. All of a sudden, the screen changes and you're staring at the girl through some kind of odd lens style. Fish eye, bug eye, whichever. Anyhow, this creature suddenly attacks her and this goes on for however long you choose and then, another creature comes out.

You choose the ending. (:

TomFulp 2008-11-11 15:40:05

"I regret that the only kiss I ever knew was that of a spider."

XxdeathpriestxX 2008-11-11 16:03:12

1st after toms comment and here's my idea.

The girl slowly walks into the twmple and sees heiroglyphics of a spider and then walks into a large room, it's vacant and a ray of the sun goes down into a hole, the spider comes and attacks, cut it off just before she's attacked for suspense.

ThrasherMan 2008-11-11 16:09:56

The girl is exploring ancient ruins with fascination when a spider pops up behind her. She doesn't notice, so she continues studying the hieroglyphics with a magnifying glass. Make a scary scene like the spiders about to kill her, then the spider taps her on the shoulder, she turns around and screams, the spider says "Hi!" and the girl just stares in awe at the spider. The spider then invites the girl into his lair, which is covered in luxurious stuff a human would have, but changed for the size of the spider and for its shape. They have a talk, and the spider is really nice, and the spider invites her to sleep over as she seems tired. As she is sleeping, the spider sneaks up on her and eats her. The End.

You can choose another ending, this one just seemed so ironic.

And hows the Age Of War 2 coming?

skarai 2008-11-11 16:18:46

Balls.

elharrisono 2008-11-11 16:19:04

you should have the chick riding the guy around the temple, doing flips and such...maybe have her fight some random guy

elharrisono 2008-11-11 16:20:16

sorry, i mean riding the spider thing...not the guy... yeah...sorry bout that...

Orazner 2008-11-11 16:30:31

Maybe just have her running frantically through the jungle, roaring sounds in the background, see the spider in persuit (make him appear big and scary, its important for the idea), gradually the spider catches up and then when the women faces the spider it turns out to be really small, women quishes spider, end. Just a simple tense action for 30 seconds then a lighthearted ironic ending, always a crowd pleaser, hope it helps :P

captainwillies 2008-11-11 16:32:08

girl crashes spaceship into planet

gets out explores the jungle looking at weird plants

finds ancient temple

looks at the glyphs and sees the people bowing to a huge spider god

walks inside still curious

in a dark place lights a match

spider is behind her , cahses her indiana jones style

falls through the floor

lands into a dark room which imidatly lights up

the room is a treasure

zoom into girls face shes smiling

next scene is in a space station dinner

aliens and humans drinking coloured liquids

and eating strange foods

zooms in on a newspaper or T.V.

the latest news lucky explorer girl finds treasure.

THE END

captainwillies 2008-11-11 16:32:56

correction: treasure room

Gatling 2008-11-11 16:35:09

Can I you include rape? preferably the spiders raping the girl or vice-versa.

RandomIsWhatIAm 2008-11-11 16:35:43

Girl goes in temple and have smex with spider. End.

Just jokinh.

Girl cuts through many vines of the vast jungle. She finds an achient temple known as Askya. She ventures into it. After many hours (in this case, seconds) She founds a rare item known as the Master Sword (omg link?) She picks up the sword until the temple is shaking like an earthquake. She trips and realized there was a giant spider blocking the exit.

Ending 1:
She attacks with the master sword and escapes. End

Ending 2:
She rides the spider like a horse and runs out of the temple, then stab the spider. End.

Ending 3:
Spider eats her. Period.

Hope my idea is useless/helpful!

BoxHeadlord 2008-11-11 17:17:09

i got one for the monsters put like giant man eating plants in it

Moonfeather 2008-11-11 18:11:44

The girl is walking around the a very dusty Temple, looking around with great feeling of worry. A silhouette of the monster runs across the screen and the girl looks back and sees nothing. She pauses and then continues in the direction she was going. A discarded exoskeleton husk is seen on the ground, the girl kneels over to examine it, but hears the creature scurrying around behind her. The girl stands up and turns around. Staring her directly in the face is the monster and the girl is completely shocked, but quickly changes to laughter. She runs her hand down the side of the creature's head, takes out some food for it, and says "I have been looking everywhere for you, (name of monster)! Come on, lets go home, Pa is making more food like this." and both run out of the Temple side by side.

lenkalamari 2008-11-11 18:22:40

Girl = antagonistic bitch who works for some galactic temple-crushing company

Spider = Awesome eco-warrior

Cherban 2008-11-11 18:41:58

girl has sex with spider

kretan 2008-11-11 18:46:35

okay i thought of a comedy.
the girl comes into a dark room inside the temple. she looks around and you see the spider right above her. the spider drools on her and then she looks up. she screams then pulls out a laser gun and shoots down the spider.
Spider: Aw WTH! Im supposed 2 kill you! It was in the script!
Girl:pff the script doesnt make any sense. i mean im a soldier from the future how can i NOT kill you.
turns out temple is is a box in a studio.
Directer: okay cut! hey girl, go outside and lets see if we can fix the script.
girl:fine.
the girl walks outside into a jungle and gets killed by a monkey.
:3

Bluemidgetguy 2008-11-11 18:51:29

The woman (NOT GIRL) is tracking something (The viewer doesn't know, it could be a team member, or some sort of treasure, artifact, basically something important enough for a military bad ass female to be out there) She has a scanner that she keeps looking at to see how close she is.

The scanner points into the direction of a hidden temple. She has to move a lot of shrub and vines to find a door. The temple doesn't look big at all. All she sees is a door and when she opens the door (The door is very hard to open, she has to plant her feet on something to get more strength and push) it leads to a stair case that she follows.

It's very dark, she can either take out night vision goggles or light a torch (Depending on how you design her. She could be like a forest guide type and use a torch, maybe she finds a torch at the entrance that she lights)

As she follows the stairs down she is passing odd statues of weird creatures that look massive, as if they are gods. They could resemble the bug or something else. Maybe the bugs master or creator or something else. She passes one that looks human.

She hears a noise that sounds like something running REALLY fast it makes it's natural noise of like a bug.

She encounters the creature and a fight ensues. To make some suspense, maybe her gun is knocked out of her hands, or she runs out of bullets. She could start could a melee weapon in the temple. An axe would be great. No swords, too cliche. She kills the creature.

She doesn't just walk away from this casually, she is more alert. Her facial expression is saying "I WANT TO FIND WHAT I'M LOOKING FOR AND GET THE FUCK OUT NOW"

She finds what she is looking for (either a teammate, a gem, a briefcase, a map, I would go for a teammate and when she finds him they could be dead. Not brutally dead, but obviously dead, maybe for a few days too. The team member could be holding something that she recognizes like a necklace or something and she brings it close to her.

Suddenly she hears the same noise once again. She keeps thinking she sees multiple of those things. She throws her torch out in the open where they are running around. It reveals a massive horde of them. All startled by the torch light.

It ends with the torch slowly fading out as the horde moves closer to her. She has her axe in both hands as they close in on her.

The end?

agnryscotsman 2008-11-11 18:54:07

Hmmm...Girl enters large temple in deep jungle, vines everywhere, trees blotting out the sun. (Sidenote:If possible, try to give her a Lancer as a weapon. Its the chainsaw gun from Gears of War, look it up on ask.com if you don't know what it is.)
Girl finds large generic golden statue, just as spider thing sneaks up from behind. Girl does a matrix-style side flip to aviod being impaled by spider, sprays a storm of lead at spider, whose "skin" is bulletproof. one bullet hits the head, which is not bulletproof. Spider gets enraged by wound, charges, and attempts to stab girl with both claws. She rolls the side (do a barrel roll), and the spider gets its claws embedded in the wall. If you use the lancer, make it so she's out of ammo and uses the chainsaw bayonet to decapitate the spider. If not, just have her put a quick burst through its head. Nice spider creature design btw.